Reading the Essay that Got Me Into Harvard | Personal Statement | Indonesian Student

Hi friends! I am Wai from Indonesia, Harvard Graduate School of Education class of 2023. In this video, I am reading the personal statement that got me into Harvard. I edited some parts and took out some sentences that I find too personal but I still try to maintain the flow of the essay :) It took me a while to build the courage to share my essay in public (and to edit the personal parts without losing the main points hehe), I hope you find this video helpful! I remember when I was writing my essay, I learned A LOT from other people sharing their essays on YouTube and I want to contribute to future applicants by sharing mine too!